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Old 12-04-2007, 21:41   #1 (permalink)

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What do you think ?

As I am quite new to UW photography I would like to hear Your opinion and also critique and what to improve.

Three photos here for You to dissect, the Nudi` was taken with the camera flash so light it a bit off.
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Old 12-04-2007, 23:58   #2 (permalink)

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What a gorgeous coloured unicorn fish - where were you when you took that one?
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Old 13-04-2007, 20:56   #3 (permalink)

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Photo was taken in the North Male atoll Nov last year.
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My tuppence worth:

Photo 1: A nice grabbed record shot. Lovely colours and the eye is sharp; which is the important thing. A nice picture.

Photo 2: Again, lovely vivid colours and it appears to be nice and sharp. If I were to make suggestions (only my opinion) then it would be to move the strobe over (if you can) so to avoid only lighting it from one side. I would also go for a tighter crop. The top and right is pretty dead space and doesn't really add much in my opinion. This could also let you avoid having the image quite so central.

Photo 3: Another nice grabbed shot. I think that the reflected light from the surface really add to the feel of the picture. It is bit unfortunately that you've lost a bit of the tail but then I know how hard it is to get these pictures in the first place. Personally, I would PS the head of the second fish out of the picture and remove some of the blank water. Perhaps cut the picture into a landscape format.

Just my suggestions.

Nice pictures. Well taken.

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